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The discord you cause is astounding- you call me the drama queen.
Honey, you don't know the first thing about reality.
You're always, always stuck on your own petty tragedies.
What about all the others? What about me?
Let me know when the tables turn on you, dear.
We used to care, but it seems to me the end is here.
Our run was long and we had our moments,
We've taken separate paths, obvious which way you've chosen.
Steady your poison arrows, take your aim-
Point your venomous word at me, and fire away.
You've never missed a shot, not once- you're slipping.
You've always been perfect, for them- your seams are splitting.
Attacking with words, always trying to prove yourself right.
You could never have seen this coming with no hindsight.
The appearance is crumbling away under you.
Was it everything you thought you knew?
Only wanted to be something for someone else.
If you had let me, would you have called for help?
Reaching out a hand now- you're too late.
Close your eyes quickly as they open your floodgate.
A single drop of water, no flood at all.
You can see now: This is your downfall.

-SDL
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Raw emotions are a powerful thing.
Makes for some good poetry.

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Powerful

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Always be a first-rate version of yourself, instead of a second-rate version of somebody else.
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There is a lot of good stuff here. You express your raw emotion very well :D

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Life is like a rubix cube... it pisses you off.

... so who invented the horse anyway... so impractical

~Bobibillius~Darn-Im-Frustrated=Eefera=ForeverWriting*Maeix2*ShadowRaven1
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I really like this piece..
It has such strong emotion.


P.S. YOU GOT MY VOTE!! XD
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